i fiddled around with this page a bit. i realized when you can’t see jacob’s mohawk, he could be confused for susan. & moses jones ends up with some weird expressions, leaving me wondering what she is thinking. but i do like how the page turned out. i don’t use a lot of background. i am kind of minimalistic. i did add some to the middle panel when i realized how much dead space i had left. mason jars–the storage of choice (& drink ware of choice) from my cooperative living experience. personally, i think mason jars are most excellent in both categories & continue to use them a great deal even though i am no longer cooping.
if i could spend all day putting out these pages, i would be so zen. it is the most relaxing thing i can do. even fixing my fuck-ups is fun for me.
but, alas, life beckons me & my minions have to argue right on top of me if i work while they are awake.
so, tonight, tonight sweet moses i will work on page 14….
I have no idea what this comic is as I just came across it but I know that just looking at this one page makes me want to see the rest! good job!
thank you so much! it is good to get some feedback. i know i enjoy my work, but the rest of the world’s reaction remains a mystery to me.